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"Thank-you Lord" (poem)
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DreamCatcher
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Oh you can't let a few get ya down....And on your poetry from what I took of it I thought something happened to a loved one...
You know sometimes its helpful to write like you are and I wouldn't let ANYONE stop that if I were you...You maybe helping someone else by your poems, plus getting out feelings...Not all poems are happy and laughing...Some of the best poems are sad poems....So emo or not I thought the poems were great and they tell a story of someones life...
You know sometimes its helpful to write like you are and I wouldn't let ANYONE stop that if I were you...You maybe helping someone else by your poems, plus getting out feelings...Not all poems are happy and laughing...Some of the best poems are sad poems....So emo or not I thought the poems were great and they tell a story of someones life...DreamCatcher said:Oh you can't let a few get ya down....And on your poetry from what I took of it I thought something happened to a loved one...
I dated a girl for 4 years... I loved her more than anything - wanted to spend my life with her ... but she was killed not even 7 months ago ....
Umm.... mind telling me which poem you like the best?
DreamCatcher
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I really liked them all....But "Somebody Cared" really pulled at the heart strings...And you know people can relate to that....Everyone has lost someone in their life or most people have....
Don't bitch about Necro'ing my own thread. It's mine, I'll do as I like with it.
More poetry. Like it or not.
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Give me one good reason why I should not take this fall.
Tell me just this once, because nothing else matters at all.
I've kept falling, fading into mere thoughts.
I'm not fading out, I'm counting all these shots.
Countless rips and jagged tears, tempt my hearts will to stay.
Not like you've noticed, none seem to know when I've walked away.
Although I've said good-bye,
I thought I'd give it another try.
All I've ever wanted, was a reason not to die.
I asked softly, but you didn't even try.
I'll fall with grace, no farewell kiss.
Breath in the essence of death, and whisper "So it's like this ..."
The Ground
I've given it all away, all I've ever owned.
I don't need anything, nor a need to bemoaned.
For once I've made my final move, I shall forever be blessed.
Happiness and tranquility, enjoying eternal rest.
I'll look you in your eyes, slowly caressing your face.
It isn't out of sorrow, I'm saying I've found my place.
You look into my eyes, wept, looked down and frowned.
I'll walk away, not looking back, and I'll crawl into the ground.
Chains
Tomorrow came, and shed light onto the Earth.
A light I've dreaded, what is the morning worth?
Another day, I'll cast happiness into the sky.
One more day passes, and I've yet to say good-bye.
What has been done to a man, held with chains?
Chains of humiliation, devastation, all of his pains.
Sleepless nights, nightmares of her face.
Whispering, pleading, "Forget me, leave this place."
No solace for this man, not a shed of consolation.
She's gone now, and he's failed to be her salvation.
Now he's been searching, giving his cry,
"Please, hear me, I love you ... Good-bye..."
Nothing
I've opened up my sightless eye.
I've lost all my memories, fallen to the sky.
And with the slowest whispers, I'll ask you;
"Tell me it isn't true."
I once told you I'll do whatever it takes.
I once told you how I felt about all of your mistakes.
With a sad heart, I've realized I've lied.
I can't forgive you, trust me, I've tried.
So tell me how you hate me, you'll never love me again.
Go on, forget me, leave - there's nothng to gain.
I've shown you just how to hate.
Now show me how this is all our fate.
Rising and falling, nobody cares anymore.
I'll leave from your life, let it be like before.
And once I'm gone, and completely forgotten,
Know I'm decaying, I'm completely rotten.
Her Kiss
I've felt her kiss, across my face.
I've smelled her fragrance, all over this place.
She is in love with me,
She wants to own me.
My eyes have lost their light.
My eyes just lost their life.
But she has been my everything.
Strange, shes became nothing.
My heart is weeping.
My love is seeping.
Why have I fallen into what I can't bare?
When will I understand, or even start to care?
Let me wake up in despair.
Let me choke on your air.
You've placed a kiss across my chest!
And now I'll die just like the rest!
You've taken everything I've ever loved!
Tell me why I'll be another one shoved!
What a wicked thing to say ...
I wanted to die another way!
Death's kiss has poisoned my rushing blood.
She's dragged my soul through the mud.
She's taken my life,
A kiss like a knife.
I'll fall under her spell, and go with the sin.
Look at this man, he's dead from within.
Good-Night
Listen to what I have to say.
You wont see me after today.
I told you I was never coming home.
Now sit there, shaking, all alone.
I've walked away, and I'm never coming back.
Change the station, switch to the next track.
You've always tried to stop my breath.
Hearts stopped beating, welcoming death.
I'm feeling ill, my steps became strained.
I've fallen, face forward, life completely drained.
You've taken it from me, you've finally won.
My heart's will is gone, I'll never taste the sun.
How can one cure dead ambition?
Could this finally be my submission?
Have I reached your ideal condition!?
Trapped inside your favorite position!?
Happiness follows your upper hand!
Your satisfied when I can't even stand!
You'll sit there, and rip a hole through my heart.
Poison my soul, and listen for it to restart.
You've asked me nicely, "Why don't you stay?"
But today will be my day!
I've taken off, and sought new life.
Even if I find it with my knife!
Blood splashes across the cold, hard ground.
And sure enough, she didn't make a sound.
I'll take my life, to keep it from yours.
Never again will I crawl on all fours.
Even if I never find my light ...
I'll look you in the eyes, and tell you ... "Good-night."
The End
Have you ever been hurt?
Heart tossed to the dirt?
Felt your soul wane?
Your spirit drain?
I'll begin to search, but know I'll suffer.
The mark of a journey has made us tougher.
We take our place, and feel damned to stay,
My courage is lost, another game to play.
As I approach my bittersweet end,
I'll recall those whom I've called my friend.
I'll mark the place you've held in my heart,
And write to each of you, how my soul is apart.
But know I've fought, and struggles for years.
Keeping it in, holding back the tears.
Fighting for love, and coming to conclude,
We're all left stranded, cold in the nude.
I feel the chills, running down my spine.
This fear, the sickness, how I wish it weren't mine.
With this houl, I'll mark my ascend.
Read my words carfully, for this is the end.
More poetry. Like it or not.
Like This
Give me one good reason why I should not take this fall.
Tell me just this once, because nothing else matters at all.
I've kept falling, fading into mere thoughts.
I'm not fading out, I'm counting all these shots.
Countless rips and jagged tears, tempt my hearts will to stay.
Not like you've noticed, none seem to know when I've walked away.
Although I've said good-bye,
I thought I'd give it another try.
All I've ever wanted, was a reason not to die.
I asked softly, but you didn't even try.
I'll fall with grace, no farewell kiss.
Breath in the essence of death, and whisper "So it's like this ..."
The Ground
I've given it all away, all I've ever owned.
I don't need anything, nor a need to bemoaned.
For once I've made my final move, I shall forever be blessed.
Happiness and tranquility, enjoying eternal rest.
I'll look you in your eyes, slowly caressing your face.
It isn't out of sorrow, I'm saying I've found my place.
You look into my eyes, wept, looked down and frowned.
I'll walk away, not looking back, and I'll crawl into the ground.
Chains
Tomorrow came, and shed light onto the Earth.
A light I've dreaded, what is the morning worth?
Another day, I'll cast happiness into the sky.
One more day passes, and I've yet to say good-bye.
What has been done to a man, held with chains?
Chains of humiliation, devastation, all of his pains.
Sleepless nights, nightmares of her face.
Whispering, pleading, "Forget me, leave this place."
No solace for this man, not a shed of consolation.
She's gone now, and he's failed to be her salvation.
Now he's been searching, giving his cry,
"Please, hear me, I love you ... Good-bye..."
Nothing
I've opened up my sightless eye.
I've lost all my memories, fallen to the sky.
And with the slowest whispers, I'll ask you;
"Tell me it isn't true."
I once told you I'll do whatever it takes.
I once told you how I felt about all of your mistakes.
With a sad heart, I've realized I've lied.
I can't forgive you, trust me, I've tried.
So tell me how you hate me, you'll never love me again.
Go on, forget me, leave - there's nothng to gain.
I've shown you just how to hate.
Now show me how this is all our fate.
Rising and falling, nobody cares anymore.
I'll leave from your life, let it be like before.
And once I'm gone, and completely forgotten,
Know I'm decaying, I'm completely rotten.
Her Kiss
I've felt her kiss, across my face.
I've smelled her fragrance, all over this place.
She is in love with me,
She wants to own me.
My eyes have lost their light.
My eyes just lost their life.
But she has been my everything.
Strange, shes became nothing.
My heart is weeping.
My love is seeping.
Why have I fallen into what I can't bare?
When will I understand, or even start to care?
Let me wake up in despair.
Let me choke on your air.
You've placed a kiss across my chest!
And now I'll die just like the rest!
You've taken everything I've ever loved!
Tell me why I'll be another one shoved!
What a wicked thing to say ...
I wanted to die another way!
Death's kiss has poisoned my rushing blood.
She's dragged my soul through the mud.
She's taken my life,
A kiss like a knife.
I'll fall under her spell, and go with the sin.
Look at this man, he's dead from within.
Good-Night
Listen to what I have to say.
You wont see me after today.
I told you I was never coming home.
Now sit there, shaking, all alone.
I've walked away, and I'm never coming back.
Change the station, switch to the next track.
You've always tried to stop my breath.
Hearts stopped beating, welcoming death.
I'm feeling ill, my steps became strained.
I've fallen, face forward, life completely drained.
You've taken it from me, you've finally won.
My heart's will is gone, I'll never taste the sun.
How can one cure dead ambition?
Could this finally be my submission?
Have I reached your ideal condition!?
Trapped inside your favorite position!?
Happiness follows your upper hand!
Your satisfied when I can't even stand!
You'll sit there, and rip a hole through my heart.
Poison my soul, and listen for it to restart.
You've asked me nicely, "Why don't you stay?"
But today will be my day!
I've taken off, and sought new life.
Even if I find it with my knife!
Blood splashes across the cold, hard ground.
And sure enough, she didn't make a sound.
I'll take my life, to keep it from yours.
Never again will I crawl on all fours.
Even if I never find my light ...
I'll look you in the eyes, and tell you ... "Good-night."
The End
Have you ever been hurt?
Heart tossed to the dirt?
Felt your soul wane?
Your spirit drain?
I'll begin to search, but know I'll suffer.
The mark of a journey has made us tougher.
We take our place, and feel damned to stay,
My courage is lost, another game to play.
As I approach my bittersweet end,
I'll recall those whom I've called my friend.
I'll mark the place you've held in my heart,
And write to each of you, how my soul is apart.
But know I've fought, and struggles for years.
Keeping it in, holding back the tears.
Fighting for love, and coming to conclude,
We're all left stranded, cold in the nude.
I feel the chills, running down my spine.
This fear, the sickness, how I wish it weren't mine.
With this houl, I'll mark my ascend.
Read my words carfully, for this is the end.